Wings

Last week in writing Te Ngahere we have been learning about how to use words that paint a picture in the reader's mind. What Te Ngahere had to do was pick a part in this video and write about it by using powerful words to paint a image in the reader's mind. What I think I did well in my writing was using powerful words, and what I enjoyed was re reading my writing because it was cool and I liked the words that I put in my writing like puny boy. What I think I could do better is adding a bit more detail in how they flow together.

My writing is not finished