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Thursday, June 15, 2017
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Te Maunga has been learning to do persuasive writing on their Chromebook. On my persuasive writing I did well, very well is that I was working on my goal. My goal is using more full stops to make my sentence more shorter. In my writing i could do better is work on my goal more thow so I can be better at doing that goal. So i can get better at doing a different goal. what is a persuasive writing? A persuasive writing is when you ask someone like your mum if you can go somewhere or get something. you have to try and bairg them to get it.
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Hi Anyah its Isaiah S and I just want to say that your writing is OK but you need to fix up some of your words
ReplyDeleteHi Anyah, When you are posting about your learning, it is helpful to include your learning (writing) DO you think you could add your persuasive writing so we can see what you are talking about. Also with your reflection please try and be specific about your goal. What was it? What exactly did you do well and what exactly could you do better?
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to reading your writing.
what words Isaiah
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