This is my second 100 word story
The day just started and the confusion had hit. My eyes stared at the board and aunty Falicia’s voice was buzzing around my head and through my ears. Words popped in my face one by one as Falicia spoke my name out. “Bob, Bob, Bob, Bob, BOB” said aunty Falicia. My head shocked and I sat there in silence for as long as it took. “I was still confused” “ I don't know what to do” said Bob. I replied yes Mrs but she just gave me the look. I stood up looked around and no one wanted to help me. Picture from Pobble 365 link on the photo 
Kia Ora Anyah, this is Marley and I go to Paihia School too. I love your blog about 100 word story because you put loads and loads of effort into it. I liked how you described Falicia’s voice because you said that Falicia’s voice was buzzing around my head and through my ears. Why did you choose to write a 100 word story?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Anyah, it's Vanya here. I have been going through your amazing work that you have done during this term. I have been reading your 100 word story. I think that you did well writing that wonderful story. I hope you keep up with the great work and I aren't wait till you come to BOIC.
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