Beach Ed

Te Maunga has been learning to write some of the bits that we did at the beach.The bits that I did well is that I got to be the leader of my class at the beach.I can do better is that I can make my powtoon intersting.
I hope you like it 2017 Beach Ed   

Anyahs writing goals

My class Te Maunga has been learning to do our writing goals.The goals that i am higher on is R4. I think that I should work hard on is that i should move on to the next levels.WALT:planing writing goals. 2017 writing goals.

	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea	Structure	Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R4	R3	R2	R3	R4	R	R4
	I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.	I use capital letters and full stops in some sentences and try to use other punctuation.	I write simple sentences that have one idea or a  compound sentences using a joining word like: and, but, because.	I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives.	My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity. (Personal Voice)		I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	I know that i am on R4 because i know how to spell making, watching, burning, awesome, talking, sandcastles, swimming, zooming and through.But i cry do difficult  words that i don’t do that is hard for me like declicous.	I use capital letters in the right spot and I get my sometimes I get punctuation correctly.	I am a R2 because i have compowned writing.also i have long sentence	Because i have a little bit of Metaphors, verbs and Adjectives.	Because i have heaps of ideas but i am adding more detail.		I know that i am a R4 because i having paragraphs.
What next? What are your next learning steps?	To catch up to R5 i should keep on chring and chring to spell	I need to get to R4 by add more commas and eg: and do add more capital letters.	I need to get to R3 by beginning to use complex sentence	To get to R4 i need to use more Metaphors and use Adjectives and verbs.	To get to R5 i should add camplex to my id		Im going to work on  R5 by grouping my ideas together

Tryathlon

Te Maunga has been learning to do a recount.I know that i did well is that my recount has Punctuation and it is good.I should make it better by doing more intersecting recounts so i get better and better at doing recounts. here is my recount.

I hope you like it.

On Friday last week Paihia School had a tryathlon at the beach.

First Mrs Williams was talking to Paihia School about the awesome tryathlon.

Then we walked to the beach. When we were at the beach we were making sandcastles and I felt like the sun was burning me. Also I was watching the year 8 boys and girls swimming. After that I was watching the year 7,6 and 5 swimming too.

When Mihi finished swimming I ran with her to school. When I got to school

I ran around the field 2 times. I ran fast as I could through the goal post. Then I got a yummy chocolate bar from the teacher, also when I got to school I saw people zooming as fast as they could.

At the end when all of the kids finish doing the tryathlon we had a deliouce ice cream.I was a hungry hipo.

2017 Tryathlon

Get NZ writing

I have been learning how to get NZ writing. The thing that I did will is that I made it sound like me.The thing that I should do better next time is that i should do more Metaphors.

Anyah is a limo driving a lot of crazy kids

Anyah is a sky tower shining bright in the night

Anyah is a artist that does beautiful art

Anyah is a hot dog that is yum
Anyah is a pair of swimming togs that is in the pool all day.2017 Get NZ writing.