My class Te Maunga has been learning to do our writing goals.The goals that i am higher on is R4. I think that I should work hard on is that i should move on to the next levels.WALT:planing writing goals. 2017 writing goals.
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Surface Features | 
Deeper Features | ||||||
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Spelling | 
Punctuation | 
Sentence Structure | 
Vocabulary | 
Idea | 
Structure | 
Organisation | |
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Where am I?  
copy and paste the definition from above  | 
R4 | 
R3 | 
R2 | 
R3 | 
R4 | 
R | 
R4 | 
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I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules. | 
I use capital letters and full stops in some sentences 
and try to use other punctuation. | 
I write simple sentences that have one idea or a  compound sentences using a joining word like: and, but, because. | 
I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives. | 
My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity. 
(Personal Voice) | 
I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns. | ||
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How do I know?  
Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box | 
I know that i am on R4 because i know how to spell making, watching, burning, awesome, talking, sandcastles, swimming, zooming and through.But i cry do difficult  words that i don’t do that is hard for me like declicous. | 
I use capital letters in the right spot and I get my sometimes I get punctuation correctly. | 
I am a R2 because i have compowned writing.also i have long sentence | 
Because i have a little bit of Metaphors, verbs and Adjectives. | 
Because i have heaps of ideas but i am adding more detail. | 
I know that i am a R4 because i having paragraphs. | |
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What next? 
 What are your next learning steps? | 
To catch up to R5 i should keep on chring and chring to spell | 
I need to get to R4 by add more commas and eg: and do add more capital letters. | 
I need to get to R3 by beginning to use complex sentence | 
To get to R4 i need to use more Metaphors and use Adjectives and verbs. | 
To get to R5 i should add camplex to my id | 
Im going to work on  R5 by grouping my ideas together | |
 
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