Thursday, April 6, 2017

Anyahs writing goals


My class Te Maunga has been learning to do our writing goals.The goals that i am higher on is R4. I think that I should work hard on is that i should move on to the next levels.WALT:planing writing goals. 2017 writing goals.

Surface Features
Deeper Features
Spelling
Punctuation
Sentence Structure
Vocabulary
Idea
Structure
Organisation

Where am I?
copy and paste the definition from above
R4
R3
R2
R3
R4
R
R4
I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.
I use capital letters and full stops in some sentences
and try to use other punctuation.
I write simple sentences that have one idea or a  compound sentences using a joining word like: and, but, because.
I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives.
My ideas are on the topic and are beginning to show some complexity.
(Personal Voice)

I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know?
Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box
I know that i am on R4 because i know how to spell making, watching, burning, awesome, talking, sandcastles, swimming, zooming and through.But i cry do difficult  words that i don’t do that is hard for me like declicous.
I use capital letters in the right spot and I get my sometimes I get punctuation correctly.
I am a R2 because i have compowned writing.also i have long sentence
Because i have a little bit of Metaphors, verbs and Adjectives.
Because i have heaps of ideas but i am adding more detail.

I know that i am a R4 because i having paragraphs.
What next?
What are your next learning steps?
To catch up to R5 i should keep on chring and chring to spell
I need to get to R4 by add more commas and eg: and do add more capital letters.
I need to get to R3 by beginning to use complex sentence
To get to R4 i need to use more Metaphors and use Adjectives and verbs.
To get to R5 i should add camplex to my id

Im going to work on  R5 by grouping my ideas together

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