persuasive writing

In Te Maunga we have been learning to write a persuasive writing to Mrs Lindsay. I did well is finishing my writing in one day. To make my writing better is add more writing so my writing is exciting to read. Mrs Lindsay is Paihia Schools awesome principal.
                                                         
                                                              here is my writing

Dear Mrs Lindsay,

I am talking to you today because I think the school should have this awesome Maths Hub website at Paihia School.  It helps us find activities to our goals, it is easy to use and very clear to see. It will help teachers save time for other school work. I am very excited for you to get this maths hub website

It can help our learning more if we have that maths hub website. It will help our learning by finding activities that we need to learn and it has videos that we can watch.

It saves time for the teachers to work on other things for the school. Also if we don’t have it we won’t be learning as well as we should or we can’t progress in maths. It will help us find things to help us achieve our goals. It will also be very helpful for the whole school because it has the activities for us to learn.  

It is easy to use and It is clear to see. It is the same as our I can’s and it is not confusing for us.

It helps the teachers find activities for our goals and we don’t have to sit on the mat and wait for the teacher to tell us what we have to do for maths. We can find the website really quick too.

That's why I think Paihia School should have this website.  Don’t you want to help out the school? So please can you get that website for Paihia School we would really appreciate

it if you do.

Thank you Mrs Lindsay.

From Anyah

working with Shirley

Some of the people in Te Maunga has been learning to do some maths actives with Shirley. I did well by focusing and doing the right thing with Shirley. I could be better at writing a little bite faster so I know what things I can finish off.

If you don't know Shirley she Is Paihia Schools library teacher.

   WALT:add 2 digit numbers using place value and number partitioning.

inquiry

Te Maunga has been learning to do a inquiry presentation to show our family on family celebration. On my presentation I did well at finding answers that was the main thing. I could do better at adding more pages to explain more about the celebration that I did
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art

Te maunga has been learning how to draw koru patterns that represents our family. I did well at drawing my koru patterns and making it look good. I could do better at explaining more about my family. If you don't know what is a koru It is a pattern have a look on the link.                              

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Te reo maori

In Te Maunga we have been learning to say things around the classroom In Maori. In our class we have made a slideshow on our own Chromebooks. What I did well About my slideshow is that I was very proud of myself. On my slideshow I could do better is that my slideshow is show more Maori words.

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wirting

Te Maunga has been learning to do persuasive writing on their Chromebook. On my persuasive writing I did well, very well is that I was working on my goal. My goal is using more full stops to make my sentence more shorter. In my writing i could do better is work on my goal more thow so I can be better at doing that goal. So i can get better at doing a different goal. what is a persuasive writing? A persuasive writing is when you ask someone like your mum if you can go somewhere or get something. you have to try and bairg them to get it.

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Toku Ako

We have been learning to do our Toku Ako so we can get started for the day. I did well on my Toku Ako because when i do my spelling test i get my words all right because i learn my spelling words. I am finishing my must do's. When Te maunga can do can do's we have to finish our must do's. Our must do's are like doing selling reading and blog commenting. Also can do's are like when you play a game and Wonderopolis.

What is a Toku Ako. A Toku Ako is like this you have to put the first thing at the top of the box's. Like i put reading to self at the top and i linked it. Be side read to self it has x3 that means that i have to do it 3 times a week here is a photo of my Toku Ako          ⬇⬇